Need some direction on your work in progress?

Want to know if your book's opening works to hook a reader?

Wondering what's missing?

Need someone to tell you where to polish your writing? 

Planning on querying an agent or publisher?
Limited-time opportunity to get a jumpstart on your 2025 writing and publishing goals, receive actionable feedback on your manuscript, and ask the hard career questions that have been buzzing around your brain. 

SERVICE INFO:


 Package Details 

- 30-minute video consultation 

- Verbal critique and career coaching 

- No written feedback provided 

- Video recording provided post-session


Submission Guidelines 

 Maximum submission length: 

 - 5,000 words of writing, OR 

 - 4,000 words plus query letter/cover copy


Session Structure 

 - ~15 minutes: Verbal critique 

- ~15 minutes: Questions and consultation on: 

      - Next steps 

      - Publishing guidance 

      - Career development 

      - Writing advice 

      - Industry insights (excluding confidential/proprietary information) 
 

Key Terms 

 1. Full payment required before scheduling 

2. Service must be completed within 45 days of purchase 

3. Recording provided for reference 

4. Consultation is personalized to individual goals 

5. Focus on honest writing assessment and strategic career guidance


What's Included 

 - Story/manuscript critique 

- Career coaching 

- Agent discussion 

- Story development 

- Character development 

- Industry guidance 

- Strategic planning




This critique/consult opportunity is back for the first time in over 2 years and is available only for this limited time! 
As an award-winning New York Times #1 bestselling editor who has read through tens of thousands of submissions in my time as an acquiring editor, I've developed an eye for knowing what works in a story and helping authors hone their craft. 

My approach is built on reading over 600 books annually across both indie and traditional publishing, giving me a comprehensive understanding of what resonates with readers and what makes stories stand out in today's market.

I've developed a non-judgmental approach to reading and enjoying books, and understanding what readers are looking for in a story. 


This popular service—available for the first time in over two years—gives you direct access to professional editorial feedback on your writing, along with invaluable career guidance. Whether you need story critique, query letter review, or strategic career advice, this consultation is tailored to your specific needs and goals.

"I was hoping to get professional feedback on my writing and I knew Angela was a trusted industry professional. The fact that she offered her time for a consult & critique via the Inclusive Romance Project was very special to me as it is rare for marginalized authors to receive feedback at all.

I loved that Angela gave me a practical example on how to improve the opening scenes. Her solution was spot on and also true to the story and I now have a starting point on how to fix what was not working.

I would recommend this service for authors who may be stuck in their process or need eyes on their writing."



~Ness Castel, Author

"Angela gave me honest and constructive feedback, tailored to my story and what I wanted it to be... I'm glad to have benefitted from her extensive knowledge [...] in her partial manuscript critique and phone consult. 


It'd be easy to feel intimidated by her wealth of experience, but when you meet her she's friendly, tactful and supportive. I highly recommend her services." 

~Luz Maupin, Author

This is your opportunity to receive personalized writing feedback and career guidance. 


During our session, I'll provide industry insights (while respecting confidentiality), offer agent advice, and help you explore story and character development. 

Whether you need strategic direction or simply reassurance, I'm here to help. This consultation is especially valuable if you're seeking honest, constructive feedback on your current writing project. 

Our discussion will focus specifically on your work and goals, ensuring all strategies and advice are tailored to your unique career path.


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Critique and Consultation Limited Time Offer$400

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  • 1xCritique and Consultation Limited Time Offer$400
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All prices in USD

Package Details:

  • Verbal critique of up to 5000 words.
  • OR 4000 words plus a query letter or blurb/cover copy.
  • 30 minute video call to discuss writing feedback and additional questions.
  • Recording of video call for you to review/revisit.
  • Follow-up PDF with general writing advice and 2-3 specific points from our conversation.


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