
Want to know if your book's opening works to hook a reader?
Wondering what's missing?
Need someone to tell you where to polish your writing?
Planning on querying an agent or publisher?

SERVICE INFO:
Package Details
- 30-minute video consultation
- Verbal critique and career coaching
- No written feedback provided
- Video recording provided post-session
Submission Guidelines
Maximum submission length:
- 5,000 words of writing, OR
- 4,000 words plus query letter/cover copy
- ~15 minutes: Verbal critique
- ~15 minutes: Questions and consultation on:
- Next steps
- Publishing guidance
- Career development
- Writing advice
- Industry insights (excluding confidential/proprietary information)
Key Terms
1. Full payment required before scheduling
2. Service must be completed within 45 days of purchase
3. Recording provided for reference
4. Consultation is personalized to individual goals
5. Focus on honest writing assessment and strategic career guidance
What's Included
- Story/manuscript critique
- Career coaching
- Agent discussion
- Story development
- Character development
- Industry guidance
- Strategic planning
My approach is built on reading over 600 books annually across both indie and traditional publishing, giving me a comprehensive understanding of what resonates with readers and what makes stories stand out in today's market.
This popular service—available for the first time in over two years—gives you direct access to professional editorial feedback on your writing, along with invaluable career guidance. Whether you need story critique, query letter review, or strategic career advice, this consultation is tailored to your specific needs and goals.


I loved that Angela gave me a practical example on how to improve the opening scenes. Her solution was spot on and also true to the story and I now have a starting point on how to fix what was not working.
I would recommend this service for authors who may be stuck in their process or need eyes on their writing."

"Angela gave me honest and constructive feedback, tailored to my story and what I wanted it to be... I'm glad to have benefitted from her extensive knowledge [...] in her partial manuscript critique and phone consult.
It'd be easy to feel intimidated by her wealth of experience, but when you meet her she's friendly, tactful and supportive. I highly recommend her services."
This is your opportunity to receive personalized writing feedback and career guidance.
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Package Details:
- Verbal critique of up to 5000 words.
- OR 4000 words plus a query letter or blurb/cover copy.
- 30 minute video call to discuss writing feedback and additional questions.
- Recording of video call for you to review/revisit.
- Follow-up PDF with general writing advice and 2-3 specific points from our conversation.