Keep Making Story Magic: Get Personalized  Feedback & Support with a Live Consultation.
Special Add-On Price of $150 (Normally $400!)

Want extra support applying what you learned in the workshop?

Add a 1:1 consult for just $150 and get personalized feedback on how to strengthen deep point of view, pacing, or dirty dialogue in a specific scene or section of your work-in-progress. 

You’ll choose your feedback focus based on the workshop you’re adding this consult to. If you've purchased multiple workshops or want feedback on different topics, you can buy multiple sessions—just indicate at the time of booking which topic each session is for. 

 
You’ll submit up to 2,500 words in advance, and I’ll review your scene before our live 30-minute Zoom call. 

During the session, I’ll walk you through key opportunities to deepen character connection—offering real-time insight, examples from your own work, and answers to your questions.


What's included:

Submit up to 2,500 words from your WIP (a scene or chapter where you want stronger reader-character connection) 

Live 30-minute consult where I walk through your submission and share feedback directly with you 

2–3 key areas of improvement for deep POV, including suggestions tailored to your voice and scene 

Insight into where deep POV can be added, refined, or expanded—often with examples using your own writing 

Recording of the consult for your reference 

A PDF recap of our meeting

Prefer Not to Do Zoom?

If video calls aren’t your thing, no problem. 


 As an alternative, I can record your feedback and send it to you, and we’ll follow up with a 15-minute Q&A via Voxer. 


What’s Voxer? It’s a free walkie-talkie-style app that lets us exchange voice messages on your schedule. You can listen, reflect, and respond when it works for you—no camera, no time pressure. 


 If this option feels like a better fit, just reply to the email you receive after purchase and I’ll set it up for you!

Grab your 60+% discount now!

This is high-level editorial insight you can act on right away—and a great way to reinforce what you’ve learned. 


  Great for post-workshop implementation 

  Great for real-time application of the techniques 

  Great for getting unstuck or leveling up your character work 


  **Upgrade now for $150** to include personalized feedback on your writing. 

**Add an additional 30 minutes for a full hour of Zoom (or 45 minutes of Voxer) at an additional $75 (a discount of 25% from my standard pricing).

 

 *If you do not own the workshop and aren't planning to purchase it, please note that you will need to purchase a feedback session [here] as a full product.* 


 This add-on is a bonus available **only** to those who have already purchased the workshop. 


*Please note that as this is a service, it is not eligible for a refund.*

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Additional 30 minutes private 1:1 consult

Add this to your order to get a full hour private consultation.

This allows us to go deeper in your personal struggles or need for support. 

We will have more time for questions and discussion about both your feedback, but also questions about your career, writing and more. 

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